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=my birthday = A great day was arriving, a day I’ve been waiting for a whole long, long year for. It’s the one day of the year that I enjoy the most.its when we get to go to the pool and have fun playing street ball. and then have some yummy food it was every where and it smelt so nice that me and my friends couldn’t wait to eat it. There was nachos,lollies,cocktail savaloys,and chips,with the yummiest self saucing chocolate pudding with vanilla ice cream,yumm,yumm.it was my birthday a ones in a year thing its your birthday i got heaps of presents but most of the presents was money but thats cool as well. for half the day we where at the pool having fun on the water run and the hydra slid and we had like 12 people where in the hydra slid and then i came down and then i came down and knocked down every one it was so funny and then we went home and then we went and played street ball for 10 minuets and then came in side for some lunch and then went and played street ball again and then the ball went up in to the top of a spiky tree and know one would go get it so i did i was really saw after that. and then we got out the some beds and then we slept in the the living room and then watch some movies then we played xbox till 12 and then stayed up talking till 4 and then we went to sleep and then we woke up had some breakfast we had eggs on toast and some juice and then my friends parents arrived so i said good bi and then i went home

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wake up at ten o'clock in the morning on Monday and get dressed and get my bag .packed and then i make my breakfast and then i site down and watch some t.v and then my comes down the drive an tots the horn and then i grab my bags and pot them in the car and we head of to Masterton and then we get dropped. of at Lakeview school and then i see all of my friend’s and then we get called in to the bus and then i sit next to Cody and we .listen to some music and then before we know it we are at camp anderson i am so existed i cant wait to catch up with all my friends and then we go in to the new hall and go over the rules and then we get to have some free time and then we have some lunch and then we have ministry and then we go to bed and then we wake up then we have to clean up our cabin and make our beds and then we go out and have some free time and then the bell will go. off and then we have to line up and then the fastest will get some points. and then we get our breakfast and then we have to do some jobs and our job was grounds that is to clean. up the camp and then we got to do the activities and the girls go to do paint ball ant we got to go on. the four wheelers and they are so fun because i get to get to go on the 80s and we get to do a. really cool track and then we went for a swim and then we got to have free time and then i t was night and sense I’m a leader that means the the leaders get to. have a party and then i got 8 girls and. 1 guy on my lap and then i got a nick name santa its so funny because i get to give out presents and then we went to bed then we wake up cleaned the cabin. and then we had breakfast and then go on the bus and then we went home =====

Exposition Moderation 14/2/11

name Daniel

Walt we are assessing our skills in writing an expositio

“Should Greytown school be offering extra curricula activities such as music, dance, drama and sports?”

plan

why should the answer be yes why we should we have it why would it be good for as and our school and what would happen if we did do it

“Should Greytown school be offering extra curricula activities such as music, dance, drama and sports?”yes because it would be fun for every one and people like doing that staff and lots of people would like play instrument and do drama and make music and it would be good for our school because we would get mor kids coming in to our school and we could play agenst people from ather schools for sports and staff like that and what would happen if our school because it would be fun and kids would actrely wont to come to school and thats why we should have those things and if we do get it the drama club could do shows and staff and that would be really cool

By:Daniel Jaquiery